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Complete of the utmost regret;
I bet,
You'll notice me once I forget.

Lonely, is your little pet,
So cold and wet,
Waiting to be lost in your debt.
A safety net.

I can't believe that I would let,
And fret,
And never get,
The expectations I have set.

(c)Sylwia Wielgosz 2008
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Quick free-write that sucks a bit too much.
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*poetcrystaldawn:iconpoetcrystaldawn: Apr 11, 2008, 12:21:43 PM
It's not a terrible piece, but I am not fond of 99% of rhyming poems. People force the rhyme too much for me.

Quick question: Why did you put the comma on this line?
Lonely, is your little pet

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Poetry by Crystal Dawn

I hate members who fav for the page views...
~ExquisiteDefect:iconExquisiteDefect: Apr 12, 2008, 4:44:48 AM
Because it's not that Lonely IS the pet. It's that the pet is lonely.